Slow Work

by Ash · 10/12/2025
Published 10/12/2025 09:14

The jar sits on the counter, still,

or seems to be. But if you watch,

a tiny movement, against my will

or knowledge, works, without a catch.


Small bubbles rise, a silent fizz,

like hidden thought, a kind of breath.

The cloudy brine, exactly as it is,

yet changing, slowly, close to death


of one thing, birth of something new.

It smells of earth, and sour, sharp.

A slow, internal, subtle hue

of life at work, a quiet harp


playing under the kitchen light.

I check it daily. A shift, a bloom.

It feels like waiting, day and night,

for something good to fill this room.

#domestic life #fermentation #patience #transformation

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