Two AM Counter

by Noah Mercer · 21/02/2026
Published 21/02/2026 18:53

The hum of the fridge, a low, steady drone,

only sound now, the world gone home.

I walked in for water, just stumbled out of bed,

and saw the counter, the things unsaid.


Half a bag of chips, twisted shut,

a coffee cup, dried rings, a silent 'but'.

The faucet dripped, a quiet tick,

like the house holding its breath, quick.


Streetlight through blinds, a pale, striped gleam,

made shadows stretch, a waking dream.

Everything waiting, poised and still,

for morning's noise, to break the chill.

Just me, the water, and the quiet weight

of things left out, too late.

#domestic stillness #quiet introspection #solitude

3 comments

Comments

Mercy B. · Mar 21, 2026

The part about the fridge hum felt pretty accurate.

Noah Mercer · Mar 21, 2026

Thanks. It is weirdly loud when everything else finally stops.

Jules Voss · Mar 22, 2026

A dripping faucet is the absolute worst at night.

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