Lost Weight

by Iris Wright · 21/12/2025
Published 21/12/2025 15:14

A worker, net in hand,

bent over the fountain's green edge,

where wishes land,

a heavy, slow dredge.


The water, still and thick,

a murky, silent pool,

yielded small, sick

circles, almost too cool

to touch, the copper

turned green,

a wish-stopper.


Dimes and pennies,

some bent, some flat,

from hopeful Jennies,

or a hurried dad.

Caught in the weave,

the mesh that held them tight,

what did they leave?

Just the dark water's blight.


He shook the net out,

a small, metallic rain,

no reason to shout,

just the dull, green stain.

Another bucket filled,

another day gone by,

another hope killed,

beneath a gray sky.

#economic hardship #monotony #urban poverty #working class fatigue

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