Low Tide

by Noah · 16/12/2025
Published 16/12/2025 14:48

She looked at my laces

as if the knots were a personal insult.

The grocery bags felt heavy,

the milk sweating through the paper.


She didn't have to say a word.

Her jaw just locked, a quiet click

that ended the conversation

before I could ask about her mother.


On the walk back, a white plastic bag

was caught in the chain-link by the tracks.

It snapped against the metal,

a loud, rhythmic licking

that sounded like a name being spat out.

#domestic life #unspoken tension

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Comments

leonorvaz · Mar 5, 2026

It is hard to carry those paper bags once the milk starts sweating.

Noah · Mar 5, 2026

Exactly, you're just waiting for the bottom to drop out.

Mae Grey · Mar 8, 2026

The jaw click part was a bit weird.

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