I stepped on a frozen puddle and it snapped

by Coil · 14/01/2026
Published 14/01/2026 13:37

I stepped on a frozen puddle, and it snapped,

the sharp crack like a line drawn in the sand.

Promises broken beneath my feet,

a sound that hangs in the brittle air,

a reminder that winter can be cruel,

like secrets hiding, waiting to reveal.


The ice shatters, fragments scatter wide,

reflecting the light like memories untried.

I pause, holding breath, beneath the cold sky,

wondering what other truths lie concealed,

what else might fracture when touched by our weight,

and if in the stillness, we too hesitate.

#broken promises #fragility #memory #truth #winter

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