The Offering

by Adrian · 12/03/2026
Published 12/03/2026 11:40

He held the mesh bag like a heavy heart.

The oranges were soft, one of them weeping

a sticky, pale syrup onto his knuckles

while he told me he was sorry for the noise.


I didn't want the fruit. I wanted the grudge,

the sharp, clean edge of being the one

who was wronged. I wanted to keep the bark

ringing in my ears like a bell I could use.


He touched the doorframe when he turned,

leaving a wet, sugary print on the wood.

I'm standing in the dark of the hall now,

staring at the mark, waiting for the fruit to sour.

#forgiveness #guilt #resentment #revenge

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Comments

unaroe · Mar 19, 2026

I hate the thought of sticky orange syrup on a doorframe.

saviotel · Mar 22, 2026

I totally get that feeling of just wanting to stay mad for a bit.

patient_arrive · Mar 23, 2026

Waiting for the fruit to sour is a weird way to end it.

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