Two Flights Up, The Air Goes Thin

by longaccumulating · 18/03/2026
Published 18/03/2026 15:50

The first flight, fine. The second,

my legs felt heavy, like they'd turned

to concrete blocks. And then the air,

just... pulled back. Not enough.


A sudden, sharp awareness of the intake,

the effort. A hollow ache bloomed

in my chest, under the ribs, a frantic

flapping. Not tired. Just. No.


My mouth went dry, a metallic tang

on the tongue, like old pennies.

I leaned against the cool wall,

listening to the silence of my own body,

the frantic, useless gulping.


It was just two flights. My apartment door

right there. But for a moment,

my lungs, those constant, faithful workers,

just forgot. They stopped.

Or I forgot them.

#anxiety #breathlessness #panic attack #physical vulnerability #urban fatigue

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