She almost made it to the last bar
by porchstatic
· 10/01/2026
Published 10/01/2026 20:33
She almost made it to the last bar.
Her hands on the second-to-last, so far
from failing, or so she thought. The sun was bright.
The sand below was soft. Everything felt right.
Then her grip failed. Her body went down
and I watched her fall. I watched her frown.
She landed hard on her hip. The breath
went out of her like she was close to death.
For a moment she just lay there still.
I waited for the tears. That was the skill
she needed to learn—how to cry and heal.
But she didn't cry. She looked at me. Real.
That look. That question in her eyes.
Is it okay to fail? Is it a prize
to keep trying? Will you still love me
if I can't make it? If I can't be
what I wanted to be? She sat up slow.
Dusted off the sand. She had to know.
And looked back at the bars. At what
she'd almost done. She didn't move. Just sat.