Tin Lid, Quiet Heat

by kilo_davi · 13/01/2026
Published 13/01/2026 11:19

The can’s lid, peeled back slow — a reluctant metal sigh,

curling rusty like a old man's apology.


The soup’s steam, lukewarm, rises weak—

as if it forgot it was meant to comfort.


I spoon thick chunks of soggy carrot, stubble of celery,

flavors flattening like tired promises.


Late-night hunger, a brittle ache, gnaws through the silence

where no one stirs, no voices reach the cold kitchen.


Alone isn’t a word here,

it’s the slow clatter of an empty spoon

tapping the bottom like a soft, persistent knock.

#domestic solitude #loneliness #mundane routine #night #quiet melancholy

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