The hall was quiet only the beat

by Jonah Shaw · 09/03/2026
Published 09/03/2026 09:58

The hall was quiet, only the beat

of time that measured out defeat.

I saw my face, distorted, stretched,

in glass where moments were sketched.


The pendulum swung, a heavy sigh,

as seconds ticked and hurried by.

My own eyes stared, a stranger's gaze,

lost in the passage of the days.


The numbers blurred, a dark design,

this borrowed face, that isn't mine.

Each tick a step I can't retrace,

stuck in this time, this mirrored space.

#existentialism #identity crisis #self reflection #stagnation #time

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