The acrid smell a bitter flag

by Jules · 26/02/2026
Published 26/02/2026 15:21

The acrid smell, a bitter flag,

rose from the pan again.

This failure, like a tattered rag,

a lesson born of pain.


I stood there, watching fumes ascend,

a monument to waiting.

Someone else to make amends,

someone else, creating


a warm plate, a soft word. But the fire

that blackened toast, it flared inside.

No solace in this slow empire

of things I let others provide.


The bruised potato, round and pale,

stares from the counter’s edge.

This quiet truth will not derail:

my hands must learn this pledge.

#cooking #domestic life #failure #personal growth #responsibility #self reliance

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