Iron and Almost Sweet

by Paige Vale · 17/03/2026
Published 17/03/2026 10:12

Three in the morning, a hotel room

in a city that knows me

as a reservation number.


I ran the tap, drank from

the paper-wrapped cup—the kind

with the crinkled top, like a gift

nobody wrapped with care—


and the water tasted like iron

and something almost sweet.

Not bad. Just not mine.


The way a word sounds different

when someone else's accent

lands on it.


I stood in the fluorescent light

of a beige bathroom, looking like someone

who'd been asked to leave a country

and was trying to be reasonable about it.


Three nights left.

The tap still running.

#alienation #displacement #impermanence #language barrier #travel

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