The Commuter’s Portrait
by Korri
· 08/03/2026
Published 08/03/2026 17:31
The 4 train smells like wet wool and brake dust.
I was leaning my head against the glass
when a man in a salt-stained coat
watched the stations and the darkness pass.
He handed me a folded square of paper,
a quilted napkin from a deli down the line.
He got off at 14th without a word,
leaving his handiwork to be mine.
It’s me—the heavy lids, the sagging mouth,
drawn in a blue ink that starts to bleed
where my thumb dampens the corner.
It’s more truth than I think I need.