The box came open and the smell—

by mnzan · 31/01/2026
Published 31/01/2026 15:31

The box came open and the smell—

not memory exactly, just smell,

dust and time and something else

that used to be a person.


I couldn't process through the shaft of light

fast enough. The dust moved,

heavy, slow, the way old things

move when you finally disturb them.


Clothes. A watch. Receipts.

All of it carrying the same particular

staleness that means nothing in the world

wanted this to change.


I held a sweater I'd never seen before,

and it smelled like the years

between now and then.

Like proof that someone else

lived here once.


I put it back.

Closed the box.

The light moved on.

But the smell

stayed in my hair

all afternoon.

#decay #grief #haunting #loss #memory #nostalgia

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Comments

Lila Shaw · Feb 10, 2026

The smell sticking to the hair part was a bit much.

mnzan · Feb 11, 2026

I get that. For me it just felt like it wouldn't wash off.

Lila Shaw · Feb 11, 2026

Fair enough, i guess it definitely gets that point across.

plainspokenrefuse · Feb 12, 2026

the bit about the old receipts was okay.

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