A Hairline Sound

by Opal Hart · 21/01/2026
Published 21/01/2026 20:48

The ice in my second glass,

cheap whiskey sloshing,

made that sound.

Not a clink, but a splinter.


A quiet break, a sigh

from deep inside the cube,

something giving way.

Like the first crack in a dam

you didn't know was there.


It happens so fast, you almost miss it.

Just a brief, sharp splinter.

Then it settles, everything

calm again, but changed.

The cold, still there.

#fragility #impermanence #inner rupture #quiet crisis #subtle transformation

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