The Commute

by Talria · 01/02/2026
Published 01/02/2026 13:39

The bus was nearly empty—

rows of blue seats

just waiting,

just available,

and they got on,

looked around,

and sat

directly next to you.


Your bag was touching theirs.

Your shoulder was

two inches

from their shoulder.

The armrest was

the only thing

between you

and this complete stranger

who had chosen

to eliminate

all the space.


The whole day

came off the rails

after that.

Not because anything happened,

not because they did anything,

just because

they had made

that choice,

that deliberate choice

to sit where they did,

to take away

the buffer,

to make the bus

smaller,

to make you

feel

like the city was

closing in,

like there wasn't enough

air,

like you couldn't

breathe

without breathing

their air.


You got off three stops early.

Walked the rest of the way.

Couldn't shake it.


That deliberate choice,

that sound of them sitting down,

that specific proximity,

that reminder

that sometimes

people do things

for no reason,

that sometimes

the city is just

a place where

strangers

eliminate your space

and you can't

do anything

about it

but move.

#city claustrophobia #commuter anxiety #personal space #urban alienation

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