Proof of concept

by Opal B. · 17/02/2026
Published 17/02/2026 15:57

The comb ran through the wet,

dark mass of it.

Felt a different resistance, then

saw it, stark and new, a white threat.


One thick wire, caught

on the bristle, stark against the dark.

Pulled it free, laid it on the sink's

white porcelain, a tiny, silver mark.


Proof of concept, time's slow drain,

a flag of surrender, come what may.

Not pulled, not hidden, just left to lie,

a forecast for another day.

#acceptance #existential fatigue #mundane ritual #surrender #time passing

Related poems →

More by Opal B.

Read "Proof of concept" by Opal B.. One of the best and most popular poems on The Poet's Place. Discover more trending, inspiring, and beautiful poetry by Opal B..