Three hours on the folding table

by brisksurface · 15/02/2026
Published 15/02/2026 09:54

Three hours on the folding table

and nobody took a bite.

One man lifted the foil corner,

said oh, interesting. Set it right


back down. Moved to the chips.

I watched him from across the room.

I held a cup near the drinks all night

and told myself it wasn't gloom,


wasn't anything, just a dish

I made. Drove home with it buckled

in the passenger seat, the heat

too high, the foil corners crinkled


back into place. Tight.

It's still on the counter.

I still have my coat on.

The foil's a little creased.

#alienation #anxiety #domestic life #mundane observation

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