Unknown Lock

by mizdor · 25/02/2026
Published 25/02/2026 17:08

We cleared the drawer in twenty minutes flat—

dead batteries, a coupon for a store

that's been a parking lot for years, a pen

that left a ghost line, nothing more,


a birthday candle, used, still with the wax,

and then the key. Just sitting at the back.

No ring. No tag. Brass going green

at the bow, the small deliberate knack


of something made to open something once

that no one now can name. My aunt

had moved already to the hall.

I turned it over. Felt it faint—


or I felt faint—or neither.

I dropped it in the bag. She tied the top.

The house sold fast. We signed the papers.

There's nothing left to find. There's no more stop-


ping at that drawer, no more asking

who cut this key and what it fit.

Just a lock somewhere still waiting,

or already gone, not knowing it.

#domestic life #family inheritance #loss #memory #mystery

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Comments

Levanroe · Mar 6, 2026

the ghost line pen is a mood but i wasnt really into the rest of this

nomasai · Mar 7, 2026

the part about the coupon for a parking lot was the only bit that stuck

mizdor · Mar 7, 2026

I think we all have a drawer full of stuff from places that dont even exist anymore lol

Sasha K. · Mar 12, 2026

The part about the old coupon was the only thing that stood out to me.

teomir · Mar 14, 2026

the middle part felt a bit slow once they found the key.

Iris Wright · Mar 20, 2026

That part about the pen leaving a ghost line is really good.

Cora · Mar 21, 2026

The bit about dead batteries and coupons felt very real.

zo8mor · Mar 22, 2026

weird to keep a used birthday candle in a drawer.

Ash R. · Mar 22, 2026

The brass going green is a clear image.

mizdor · Mar 22, 2026

It really is but i feel like everyone has that one relative who saves the weirdest stuff just in case lol

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