Treated

by Pjrel · 10/03/2026
Published 10/03/2026 16:43

Two years I walked past it and never stopped.

The coating held its silver, caught the light

the way it's designed to—nothing dropped,

no sign of anything not right.


This morning: one curl at the post's base,

the zinc peeled back in a strip so clean

it looked deliberate. Underneath, a trace

of orange that had been there, unseen,


for months at least. The kind of rust

that moves in the dark beneath a surface

that's doing its job. You have to trust

the surface. That's the whole purpose.


I missed my train. Stood on the sidewalk

thinking about the factory—the dip,

the hot zinc, the long guarantee of talk

about protection. The convincing grip


of something that looks fine.

#false security #hidden corrosion #industrial decay #trust in appearances

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