The pickle jar's silent menace

by tone_starts · 18/03/2026
Published 18/03/2026 08:31

I nudged it by mistake — a jar

bristling with cold brine and green ghosts.

Inside, a fog swirled—thick and slow,

the kind of quiet that presses down,


bubbling faintly like a trapped thing,

a thing better left alone.

The metal lid, swollen, a balloon about to pop,

and me holding my breath,


fearing the snap, the sudden hiss,

that chemical stink that burns the eyes.

I let it be, shoved back to the dark,

the fridge humming its indifferent tune.

#anxiety #domestic life #fear of the unknown #mundane dread #sensory aversion

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