Buying Eleven Minutes

by Lorimia · 19/04/2026
Published 19/04/2026 09:27

The rain is turning the asphalt into a mirror

and the digital eye is blinking red,

a countdown of three minutes until I’m a criminal

in the eyes of the city and the law.


I’m digging through the lint in my cupholder

searching for a silver disc to buy some peace.

I find a nickel, sticky with spilled soda,

and try to shove it home.


But the slot is jammed with another man’s failure,

a coin stuck sideways like a stubborn tooth.

I stand there in the wet, arguing with a machine,

feeling the fifteen-dollar dread

settle into the small of my back.

#bureaucratic frustration #financial anxiety #modern technology #public infrastructure #urban life

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