The Snag

by Giaune · 21/04/2026
Published 21/04/2026 22:35

The kitchen is hot and the stove is still on,

I’m trapped in this coat and I want to be gone.

The slider is buried in wool and in thread,

a silver-toothed trap that is filling with dread.


I tug at the collar, I pull at the base,

the sweat is starting to run down my face.

A jagged-edged jaw has a hold of the knit,

and the more that I struggle, the tighter it bit.


I’m stuck in the middle, not out and not in,

just a cold metal tooth pressing hard on my skin.

#anxiety #claustrophobia #domestic pressure #entrapment #psychological distress

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