Mercury Rising

by tenderhugo · 16/10/2025
Published 16/10/2025 13:09

The house is a hum of stagnant, heavy heat

now that the grid has finally clicked off.

I dug through the cabinet, past the Band-Aids and the gauze,

until I felt the thin, cold spine of the glass.


I had to shake it hard to get the red line down,

watching the heavy silver bead retreat.

My thumb felt the ridge of the ancient markings

while the sweat pooled behind my knees in the dark.


I held it up to the window’s fading glare

and saw the stubborn red line hovering.

Just above a fever, even in the shade,

waiting for the air to decide what it wants to be.


It’s a fragile thing to trust with the truth,

this little straw of poison and measurement.

I put it under my tongue and waited for the click,

but the house stayed silent and the mercury stayed spent.

#domestic life #fever #illness #measurement #mortality

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Comments

Sasha N. · Feb 24, 2026

the sweat pooled behind the knees description is a lot.

tenderhugo · Feb 24, 2026

I wanted to capture how gross it feels when the AC is actually out.

Cora H. · Feb 25, 2026

little straw of poison is such a mood

Ines Rocha · Feb 25, 2026

i really liked the part about digging through the cabinet for the glass.

tenderhugo · Feb 26, 2026

Glad that line landed, it was a weird one to think of.

tenderhugo · Feb 26, 2026

Thanks, that was the first thing that came to mind when I started writing this.

Aria Noble · Mar 1, 2026

I don't think I've seen anyone actually use a glass thermometer in years.

tenderhugo · Mar 2, 2026

They are definitely rare now, but they have a very specific feel to them.

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