It wasn't even cold

by Motel Violet · 13/03/2026
Published 13/03/2026 11:49

It wasn't even cold,

this water from the tap

in the Marriott. The heavy glass

felt alien in my hand.


I drank it down, quick.

A metallic tang,

like a penny left in your mouth

too long. A hint of something

chlorine, almost industrial.


It coated my tongue.

Not clean, not right.

Just flat. Like the light

from the window, yellowed,

a thin film on everything.


Not home. Never home.

Even my cells knew it,

rejected the mineral story

of this other, duller, stranger place.

A taste of being unmoored.

#alienation #displacement #existential unease #travel

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