A Clean Break

by Motel Violet · 18/03/2026
Published 18/03/2026 11:52

The mug, a cheap souvenir,

slid off the counter, no fear,

just gravity's dull pull.

I braced for the crash, the shattered hull,

a mess of ceramic dust and sharp edges,

but it split,

clean as a promise, or a well-timed wit.


Two perfect halves,

handle still fixed to one, a small joke,

like some old love that just unspoke

itself, no shouting, no tear.

Just a seam appearing,

leaving two smooth, separate spheres

where one round thing used to be.

No jagged hurt,

just the strange fact of two,

where I swore there was only one.

#breakup #duality #metaphor

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