Saturation Point
by Ruben M.
· 23/10/2025
Published 23/10/2025 10:15
The incense hung like a heavy gray sheet
over the heads of the family in line.
I stood at the back with the cold in my feet,
tracing the grain of the century-old pine.
They spoke the words with a practiced ease,
a rhythmic, communal, and comforting sound.
I searched for the rhythm, down on my knees,
but my tongue was a dry and a barren ground.
It’s a slow disappearance, a grainy retreat,
like a cube in the tea that you forget to stir.
There’s a faint, lingering taste of the sweet,
but the shape of the thing is a ghost and a blur.