Correction
by Ruben M.
· 21/02/2026
Published 21/02/2026 18:14
The notebook was buried under a stack
of tax forms and old magazines.
I pulled it out and felt the thwack
of eleven years and the spaces between.
I wrote about the way the wind felt
like a hand on the back of my neck.
You took your pen and made the words melt,
turning my work into a red-lined wreck.
'Illogical,' you wrote in a slanted hand,
and 'dramatic' across the final verse.
You drew a 'C' like a brand
and made the silence a kind of curse.
I stopped the car. I stopped the pen.
I let the engine of the feeling stall.
I’m looking at your ink again,
and wondering why I believed you at all.