Intercostal

by Stntes · 01/01/2026
Published 01/01/2026 15:17

The sneeze was a sudden, violent fault line.

I was just reaching for a shoelace

when the air snapped inside me,

a hot needle stitching the left side shut.


Now I am sitting on this lawn chair,

feeling the white plastic slats bite

into my back like the teeth of a saw.

I am thirty-four and moving like a hinge

that the rain has finally rusted through.


I can feel them now, those curved bones,

holding my breath in a thin, brittle cage.

They aren't as thick as I thought they were.

Just a few narrow rafters trying to keep

the whole ceiling from coming down.

#aging #existential anxiety #fragility #mortality #physical decay

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