The elevator's dead a hollow shaft

by stubbornwould · 03/12/2025
Published 03/12/2025 15:36

The elevator's dead, a hollow shaft,

so I take the door to the back instead.

The air is thick with a basement draft

and the things that people have left unsaid.


On the third step down, a yellow tread

holds a crushed-out filter, brown and dry.

Someone stood here with a heavy head

and listened to a neighbor upstairs cry.


I didn't look up to find the face,

I just kept my boots on the cold cement.

It’s a vertical, grey and lonely space

where the sound of the world is finally spent.

#grief #loneliness #mental health #urban alienation

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