Patina of Neglect

by stubbornwould · 21/03/2026
Published 21/03/2026 12:31

The wrench slipped off the brass three times.

I’m trying to shut the water for the frost,

but the spigot is a crust of frozen limes,

a hardened green where the metal’s lost.


I haven't touched this valve in a year,

letting the weeds climb the brick and the pipe.

Now the corrosion is a physical fear,

a chalky bloom that is bitter and ripe.


I scraped a flake with a shaking thumb

and watched it lodge beneath the nail.

Everything turns to salt and goes numb

when you let the upkeep start to fail.

#decay #home maintenance #mortality #neglect #rust

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