Cold Metal Lungs

by Mara L. · 20/12/2025
Published 20/12/2025 14:16

At night the radiator breathes,

clanks and hisses like an old man

trying not to wake the room.


Steam curls from chipped white paint,

a lazy serpent in the cold air.


Each groan pulls the silence taut,

a mechanical pulse in the dark,

half comfort, half warning.


The uneven breath fills the stillness,

metal lungs fighting frost,

a crooked rhythm

I count to keep awake.

#cold #domestic life #existential dread #solitude

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