Floor Count

by Mara L. · 06/03/2026
Published 06/03/2026 15:28

I tap the panel, fingers tracing a slow code,

counting floors like secret beats in a silent ode.


“Two, three, four,” my lips barely part—

a whisper lost before it can start.


The hum tightens around this metal box,

my fingertips drum out the ticking clocks.


Alone but loud in this cramped, humming room,

I talk to the numbers like they’ll change the gloom.


Counting floors like prayers, soft and dumb,

until the doors click and the spell comes undone.

#claustrophobia #existential angst #isolation #routine #technology

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