The Sir Problem

by Violet V. · 31/12/2025
Published 31/12/2025 16:06

The new coffee place, all raw concrete

and too-loud music, a beat

I don't catch. Or don't want to.

And everyone's too bright, too new.


Then the kid behind the counter,

young enough to be my daughter,

looks right at me, no hesitation.

'Can I help you, sir?' A full-blown declaration.


Sir. It lands like a small, flat stone.

I look at my face in the window, alone.

Too tired, yes. Lines where no lines used to be.

Suddenly, the whole room's looking at me,

or, more accurately, through me.

#aging #alienation #loneliness #urban life

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