The Unflinching Command, Or, The Wide Empty
by Jules Wright
· 01/12/2025
Published 01/12/2025 13:36
The suction tube had just made its sound,
a wet, small slurp, then silence profound.
My jaw was aching, already tight,
under that hot, unflinching light.
Then his voice, so calm, so matter-of-fact,
like a switch. There was no going back.
'Alright,' he said, a gentle, flat tone,
'Open for me.' And my breath, it had flown.
Open. Like a door, a dark, soft cave.
Surrender. A silent, forced brave
performance. The tang of metal air,
a penny-taste, a strange affair.
I could feel my face, stretched, absurd,
a silent scream, no spoken word.
He peered in. A tiny, silver sun
in his mirror. My self, undone.
Just a mouth, a body, a thing.
Waiting for the small, sharp sting.