The Fit

by tnsW3r · 06/02/2026
Published 06/02/2026 16:19

The shoulders are a half-inch too defined.

They pinch me when I try to reach the knob.

I feel the way his posture was designed

to hold a life and keep a steady job.


The smell of cedar and of old-man sweat

is rising from the lining of the chest.

It’s heavy as a favor or a debt,

this wool that will not let my spirit rest.

#burden of expectation #masculine identity #physical labor #working class fatigue

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