Coarse

by likesomeone · 08/12/2025
Published 08/12/2025 14:17

The air in the cellar is heavy and slow.

I'm dragging the boxes away from the wall.

There's nowhere for all of this junk left to go,

and no one is coming to help when I fall.


I grab for the bag with the lime and the grit.

The burlap is rough as it bites at my skin.

I heave it and drop it and wait for a bit

as the dust starts to rise from the fibers within.


A brown, choking cloud fills the light of the bulb.

It settles on rafters and covers the floor.

I'm just a man with a heavy-set pulse,

moving the mess toward the back of the door.

#burden #isolation #manual labor #working class fatigue

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Comments

jokecurdle · Feb 17, 2026

The burlap biting the skin was a lot.

Caleb Noble · Feb 18, 2026

The choking cloud part was a bit much for me.

likesomeone · Feb 18, 2026

Fair enough i just wanted to capture how suffocating it felt

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