The Salt of a Moment

by Iris · 31/01/2026
Published 31/01/2026 09:32

July's breath clings heavy,

sweat pools like oil beneath my hairline,

a slick film that drips slow,

blurring vision and patience alike.


The collar bites, damp fabric tight against skin,

a second skin soaked with yesterday's heat.

Each drop salty, stinging,

a silent witness to the words I wish to swallow.


The sting of sweat in my eyes—

a blur over the fight,

a saltwater veil drawn tight

between what was said and what remains unsaid.

#bodily discomfort #emotional tension #silence #summer heat #unspoken words

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bruisedreadable · Feb 26, 2026

July's breath clings heavy was a good line but the rest didn't do much for me.

Iris · Feb 26, 2026

Fair enough, glad that first line landed at least.

he8nix · Feb 28, 2026

i didn't really care for the part about the damp fabric tight against skin.

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