The transponder let out a final thin croak

by lucidquite · 22/12/2025
Published 22/12/2025 15:27

The transponder let out a final, thin croak

at the 294 junction. The gate stayed down.

The line of SUVs behind me spoke

in a collective, metallic frown.


I fished in the cupholder, past the grit,

for the quarters I’d saved for a rainy day.

They felt like teeth pulled from a pit,

sticky and small and in the way.


The yellow arm didn’t move an inch.

The quarter bounced off the plastic slot.

It’s a very specific kind of pinch

to realize you’re exactly where you’re not.

#bureaucracy #commuting #traffic #urban alienation

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