The Gatekeeper

by lucidquite · 09/03/2026
Published 09/03/2026 14:41

The guy in front is swiping a dead piece of plastic,

and the tension in the tunnel is getting drastic.

We are a herd of coats and tired eyes,

waiting for the metal to grant us a prize.


I push too soon and the bar bites my hip,

a cold, iron reminder of a sudden slip.

My palm finds the sheen of the stainless steel arm,

where a million strangers have offered their palm


to the grease and the grind of the city's machine.

I’m just another body in the spaces between.

#commuting #publictransport #urban alienation

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