The Commute

by pnt_fain · 24/03/2026
Published 24/03/2026 15:17

The window wears a smudge of human oil.

The train is cutting through the frozen soil.

I see a man in pinstripes on his knees,

between the gravel and the leafless trees.


He holds a traffic cone against his chest,

as if it were a child he’d laid to rest.

The mud is thick and black around his shoes.

We pass before I see which life he’ll choose.

#alienation #commuting #existential choice #industrial bleakness #working class fatigue

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