The Other One

by patientarrive · 05/01/2026
Published 05/01/2026 16:02

The window of the hardware store

showed me a version of myself

that didn't wait for the light to change.

He stepped off the curb while I stayed back,

his jacket flapping like a loose shutter.


At the bus stop, a woman yelled "Marcus"

and for a second, my lungs filled up

with a name that isn't mine.


I went home and looked at the hallway.

There are two hooks by the door.

One holds my wool coat,

the other is just a piece of brass

holding onto the shadow of a twin

who never actually arrived.

#existential reflection #identity #loneliness #missed opportunity

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