72 Hours

by patientarrive · 14/03/2026
Published 14/03/2026 14:41

The fridge was a choir of electric bees,

bringing the drywall down to its knees.

I walked out past the trash on the curb,

where the air is a thing you can almost disturb.


Under the I-95, the concrete is wide,

a place where the city has nothing to hide.

The rain stops to breathe, then starts up again,

smelling of iron and the fever of men.


A sodium lamp leaks a bruised, orange glow

on a puddle where the drainage is slow.

The water is twitching from a hole in the pipe,

while the rest of the world is heavy and ripe.

#alienation #cityscape #environmental #industrial landscape #nighttime #urban decay

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