Closing Time

by Maeemi · 20/01/2026
Published 20/01/2026 14:27

The door slides shut.

Finally.

I let my shoulders hit the metal rail,

a dull clank that vibrates in my teeth.

I look at a greasy smudge on the panel,

a fingerprint left by someone else

who probably felt this tired.


I drop my chin to my chest.

I don't have to keep the mask straight

between the fourth floor and the lobby.

I just breathe the stale air

and wait for the bell to tell me to be a person again.

#after work transition #identity performance #occupational alienation #urban monotony #working class fatigue

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