What the Candle Left

by mnzan · 11/03/2026
Published 11/03/2026 17:54

My roommate left a candle burning

when she moved out without a note,

just the wick still turning

in the draft through the open door.

The label wore away from heat.


I couldn't tell what scent was meant—

vanilla, lavender, something spent

trying to make this room feel right,

but all I smelled was leaving,

all I saw was the small flame

moving in the air of an empty space.


I almost blew it out.

Stood there, mouth open,

watching the wax pool and thin.


Instead I let it burn itself to nothing,

let the small light linger

in the dark where she'd been,

let it finish what it started,

let it do what candles do:

disappear into the air

and leave you standing in the dark.

#abandonment #grief #impermanence #letting go #solitude

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