I saw the jacket first

by Merit Madden · 25/02/2026
Published 25/02/2026 18:11

I saw the jacket first.

Thought about going the other way.

Didn't.


They turned. We said hey.

Something about the line, the weather,

something.


And I noticed:

the hands on the cart, open,

just resting there.


They used to grip things.

Table edges. Steering wheels.

The door frame, once,

waiting for a conversation to end.


I watched the hands the whole time we talked.

They laughed at something the cashier said—

easy, actual—and pushed the cart toward the exit.


I don't know when I gave up.

Not when we stopped talking.

Before that.


Some Tuesday, probably.

Standing somewhere, working out

the next thing I could say,

and then just—not.


Their hands on the cart.

Moving away.

Open.

#communication hesitation #everyday melancholy #missed connection #observational detail #relationship uncertainty

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