Stairwell, Fifth Floor

by Merit Madden · 15/03/2026
Published 15/03/2026 19:05

I was between floors when it happened—

between the four and the five,

bag still on one shoulder,

going neither direction.


Through the concrete window:

the parking lot below,

the sky doing something

I can't name exactly.

Orange-pink through the cloud cover,

the kind that doesn't last.


The hood of a gray car caught it first.

Held the color for maybe forty seconds.

Sat there like it had somewhere to be.


Nobody came up or down.

I stood there with my bag.


I haven't left on time in two weeks.

I don't usually catch this part.


Then the hood went flat.

The lot went gray.

I went down.

#fleeting moments #indecision #liminality #temporal suspension #urban alienation

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