Commuter Logic

by Nico · 06/04/2026
Published 06/04/2026 18:58

The rail car is rattling with a hollow, metallic sound,

and I’m looking for a reason to stay on the ground.

The boss spent an hour making me feel small,

like a shadow that’s stretching up against a back wall.


Then we slowed by the scrap yard, by the piles of the dead,

and I saw a blue tarp that was starting to shred.

A leather office chair was the only thing there,

holding down the plastic in the hot, stagnant air.


The mahogany base was heavy and deep,

like a promise that no one was planning to keep.

The blue was sun-bleached and rippling like skin,

waiting for the rain or the rust to move in.

#existential dread #industrial work #monotony #power dynamics #urban alienation

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