Concrete Levels

by Eli Baird · 17/04/2026
Published 17/04/2026 15:22

The air was thick, like soup, and tasted of exhaust.

Fluorescent lights, a sickly yellow, lost

in the damp concrete, reflections like oil slicks.

Ramps spiraled down, a series of bad tricks.


Each level, a deeper layer of dread,

where cars sat heavy, like unspoken things said

then taken back, or never quite voiced.

A cold, low hum, the air itself rejoiced

in its own weight, pressing down hard.

Just a quick trip, a simple pharmacy card.


But the smell, it clings, a metallic sting.

And the echo, of footsteps, of a small ring

of keys, magnified, then gone.

Leaving you in the grey, before the dawn.

Wondering what else this place had swallowed.

And what dark thoughts its concrete followed.

#claustrophobia #existential dread #industrial decay #subterranean spaces #urban alienation

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