Concrete Levels
by Eli Baird
· 17/04/2026
Published 17/04/2026 15:22
The air was thick, like soup, and tasted of exhaust.
Fluorescent lights, a sickly yellow, lost
in the damp concrete, reflections like oil slicks.
Ramps spiraled down, a series of bad tricks.
Each level, a deeper layer of dread,
where cars sat heavy, like unspoken things said
then taken back, or never quite voiced.
A cold, low hum, the air itself rejoiced
in its own weight, pressing down hard.
Just a quick trip, a simple pharmacy card.
But the smell, it clings, a metallic sting.
And the echo, of footsteps, of a small ring
of keys, magnified, then gone.
Leaving you in the grey, before the dawn.
Wondering what else this place had swallowed.
And what dark thoughts its concrete followed.