11:47

by jrlockst2 · 20/04/2026
Published 20/04/2026 19:05

The text came at 11:47.

I'd clocked out at 11:42.


Freezer burn still on my hands.

The walk-in cold still in my clothes.

Cardboard dust still in my hair.


I sat in the car. The phone

lit up against the dark.


The message had a line break

in the middle—like they stopped typing,

or didn't care enough to finish

the thought.


I could see my face

in the windshield.

Pale. Tired. Still wearing

the grocery store on my skin.


Five minutes.

That's how much time I had

between clocking out

and this.

Five minutes in the dark

before everything.


The text was casual.

So casual.

Like it meant nothing.


I still smelled like freezer burn.

The cold was still on me.

I still didn't know

what to do with my hands.

#existential dread #isolation #labor fatigue #late night shift #mundane routine

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